Today I have a piece of my WIP being critiqued over here. So go my Minions! Go forth! And read! Critique! Be sure to come back here and let me know how I fared in your esteemed opinions!
The piece I submitted for UB was to fulfill a 'contest' of sorts. I was to show a turning point in the story where two of the characters had to make choices that weren't going to work out well for either of them.The submission rules are here. Challenging trying to get it down to the correct number of words. I'm pretty wordy.
So go! Be Gone! Git!
I really like this excerpt and I think it is awesome that you are sending your work out to others for critique! Way to put one of your dreams into action!
ReplyDeleteI read the excerpt and liked it. Is it finished or are you still working on it?
ReplyDeleteI made the changes...most of them. :) Working on 'ing's' still. Stupid Ing's. The book is written to almost the end of chapter ONE now. When that challenge came up on UB...that scene popped into my head almost completely done. Now...to shoehorn it into the story outline! It'll change a few of the sub-stories..but I think it makes things more challenging. For me :) ACK!
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